Thursday, December 13, 2018

Editing Examples


Since President Trump took office, McKinsey has greatly expanded consulting for Immigrations and Customs Enforcement through that agency’s office of “detention, compliance and removals.” Their[SF1]  contracts with the agency exceed $20 million.



 [SF1]“Their"is a plural pronoun. McKinsey is singular. You must use “its” here. The sentence should read: “Its" contracts with the agency exceed $20 million."



Mr. Horowitz said that Mr. Strok’s texts about stopping Mr. Trump from becoming president showed that he may[SF1]  be willing to take an official action to affect the election. [SF1]“May” is a verb, present tense. The initial sentence sets this document up as “past-tense." As a result, “may” must become “might.”




Many have forgotten, or never learned how,[SF1]  to compete for workers.



 [SF1]“How” goes with “forgotten” as well as “learned.” The comma should go after “learned.”



First, Iran’s leadership is more complex and multi-faceted than the one-man state of North Korea, making it harder for Tehran to reverse course like [SF1] Mr. Kim did, and reach out to Mr. Trump.





 [SF1]“Like” is a preposition, not a conjunction. You must use “as” instead of “like.”





Using tax dollars to bailout[SF1]  farmers hurt by President Trump’s tariffs is not the way to strengthen the economy.





 [SF1]“Bailout” is a noun. What’s used is a verb phrase, thus the correct usage is “bail out.”


Monday, December 3, 2018

Resume Tips



Resume Tips for Frustrated Job Seekers


Your job search is going nowhere, and your frustration is growing--well, here are five resume tips to help snag your perfect job. You should adopt these tips exactly as stated. Do not ignore any of them. If you incorporate these suggestions into your resume, you will get more responses; from there, you are on your own come interview time. Employ these rules and your response rate will undoubtedly increase.

1. Avoid Excessive Formatting. If a hiring manager is reviewing multiple resume submissions, imagine how he or she must feel after trying to navigate around excessive formatting. Among the resume tips discussed here, this may be the most important. Placing boxes and symbols and “decoration” in your resume is, frankly, off-putting. Most hiring managers are looking for simple and direct text, no embellishments. Use only one text box for your name, which should be centered on the page.

2. Use Compelling Verbs. You’ve undoubtedly read this elsewhere, and that’s because it’s so important to creating a knockout resume. Use verbs that are original. Avoid the commonplace: managed, directed, and created, for example, will not cause your resume to stand out. Instead, opt for such verbs as: spearheaded, commanded, generated and orchestrated.

3. Always Begin with Your Education. Of all the resume tips you may read, this one is rarely discussed, but it’s important. Always lead off your resume with your education. This is because your resume should read as though it’s a narrative of your life. So start at the beginning: you were educated before you began your career.

4. Brevity, Please. Eliminate excessive verbiage. Proof your resume diligently. If a word or phrase can be removed, do so. No matter your accomplishments, keep your resume to two pages, and no more.

5. Be Your Best Admirer. No is the time to shine. Do not hesitate to brag about your education and accomplishments. Remember, you are the best candidate for this position. Make sure you communicate that to the hiring manager. This is one of the most important resume tips you’ll come across. Be your biggest fan.

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ArtGuild Sales Copy



SALES COPY-EMAIL POST

The Durham Art Guild
Hi, Mary [or whomever]:

Now is the time to show off. Now is the time to shine as an artist. Now is when it truly is all about you.

It’s time again: our annual Members Showcase! If you’ve participated in the past, you already know how exciting this time of year is. If you haven’t participated, you’re about to find out. Our Members’ Showcase exhibit is where the Guild chooses your best artwork for display. The exhibit runs from May 1 for six weeks. Only members can submit their work for the exhibition.
You’ve been a loyal member of the Guild and we want to show you how much we appreciate your support.

Here’s how it works. You may submit up to five works to be considered. Any kind of art will be considered for showing. So, here’s where it gets interesting: whether you paint or not, whether you paint in a certain style or not, whether you are a sculptor or visual artist, none of this is important. 

What is important is the quality of your work. I am the Executive Director and I know that our membership is hugely talented. I know that what you submit will be great work.
This doesn’t mean that all, or any, submissions are accepted. Because of space limitations, we’ll have your work reviewed by a member committee.

Please submit photos of your work. Please visit our website (DurhamArtGuild.Org) and navigate to the Submissions tab. From there you’ll find easy instructions on how to upload your creations. Please have all work submitted by April 10.

Don’t be bashful. Shed your humility. Now’s the time to step up and shine!

As always, thank you for being a member of the Durham Art Guild, the nation’s oldest. And please, if you have any questions do not hesitate to send me an email and I will follow up within 24 hours.

Press Release for Fine Quality Watches


New wholesale watch site, FineQualityWatches.Com, includes over thirty distinct brands of new and pre-owned timepieces that are both stylish and functional for the person on a budget or for those looking to “buy upscale.” Fine Quality Watches uses a geographically dispersed fulfillment structure so that purchases typically arrive in 24-hours.
DURHAM, NC (24/7 Press Release) JANUARY 10, 2012
Fine Quality Watches (FQW), a distributor of men’s and women’s watches, has rolled out a new website interface, designed for those who wish to purchase a range of low-to-high-end timepieces. Sample brand watches include Timex, Nixon, Breitling, and Rolodex. Each watch for sale on the site comes with a 12-month warranty and a 10-day “free look,” during which any purchased watch may be returned with no questions asked.
The new website is designed with merchant-enhanced software. Each watch is viewable at standard resolutions all the way to ultra-high views for an even better shopping experience than existed with the last site update, which itself occurred only two years ago. Site owner Stephen Foster comments: “the new look and feel of the site will mark yet another consumer-focused development and should ensure that visitors have the best experience when perusing our products.”
The site, built in customized Joomla Markup, will allow for a 10-way view of each watch. Views include: face, watch side, band enhancement, products on human models, and sizing charts. Each watch will contain over eight distinct views, all easily captured with a shopper’s mouse. The new site, according to Foster, will make shopping for watches as complete an experience as for those shopping on Amazon and other well-known watch portals.
FQW includes eight menu tabs for each watch. These are: brand, gender, vintage, new/old, price, movement, manufacturer and shipping. Fulfillment on the back end is handled by Blue Dial watches, a premier service with a tightly restricted membership. Three years ago, Blue Dial received a “best in class” designation for its service from Watch Guy, an independent watch site monitor.
Perhaps the most important change, says Foster, is that “the new interface will allow us to competitively offer high-end watches to customers who, in this segment, are notoriously concerned about seeing and “experiencing” a watch online before purchase. This will allow us to reach those buyers in a big way.”
Foster, a noted horologist, also indicates that this will not be the last change for FQW. “I have a good sense of what online shoppers are looking for. I will continue to modify the site so that we continue to be a significant venue regarding the sell of wristwatches for men and women.”
The site has also expanded its inventory of pre-owned luxury watches, with Rolex and Patek Phillipe leading in number of offerings. Earlier this year, FQW added a concierge service. It allows for site users to chat with staff and provides highly detailed specs (which few sites offer) of each watch above $500.00. FQW also installed a pricing guide for used watches late last year.
FQW is a member of the BBB. It has been recognized by Watch Matters, as one of the top 25 watch sites for 3 out of the last 4 years. It currently receives about 15,000 distinct visitors a week. It can be found at FineQualityWatches.Com.




Managed Accounts


What to Make of a Managed Account?

If you’ve worked in the employee retirement world for anything over a week or so, you have heard the term “managed account.” For a long time, managed accounts have been the primary topic of discussion for employers who offer retirement plans, such as 401(k) arrangements; they have also become a darling of the retirement provider community, including such powerhouse mutual fund families as Vanguard and Fidelity. Despite their ubiquity, managed accounts remain a mystery to most employees: thus, it’s time for a new and simple definition.

Historically, employee participation in sponsored retirement plans, such as 401(k) and 403(b), hovers around 30 percent. By any reckoning, 30 percent is far lower than it should be. It reflects a disheartening trend: none of us is actively saving for retirement. Most observers argue that the rate of retirement plan participation should be twice what it is. Here’s the dilemma: how to double up on the 30 percent rate?

Historically, retirement income has fallen into one or all of the following categories, the so-called three-legged stool: Social Security, employer-sponsored retirement plans, and personal savings. Rarely are these income sources sufficient on their own. Sadly, most people only have Social Security to rely on. Sadly, too, is the fact that the average Social Security monthly payout averages slightly less than $1,000 a month. This is one of the greatest threats to the safety and security of individuals who unknowingly believe that the government will come to their rescue upon retirement.

It’s a belief that may lead to catastrophe over the next 25-30 years.

Here’s where managed accounts enter the picture. A managed account looks like this: a retirement plan provider, such as Fidelity Investments, creates model portfolios that are tailored to each individual in a retirement plan. These portfolio (mutual fund) options use sophisticated algorithms to determine the best asset mix for Participant A or B or C. They almost always rely on age as the primary factor in portfolio selection. Thus, an individual age 60 may be placed in a portfolio that looks like this:

     30%--Value Fund
     30%--Balanced (between stocks and bonds) Fund
     25%--Bond Fund
     15%--High Dividend Fund

The individual’s account is “managed” in this way: each quarter, the plan provider will rebalance the allocations based on market performance. Let’s say that after three months of market exposure this individual’s allocation is more like 40, 30 and 15 and 15 percent. Fidelity, in this case, will buy or sell each fund to restore the original allocation. Approximately every five years, the plan provider will modify the algorithm to create a new allocation. The closer one gets to the so-called normal retirement age, 65, the less exposure these allocations will have to stocks, which can go up or down dramatically every day. The same applies, to a lesser degree, to bond funds.  The idea is to reduce portfolio volatility as the plan participant ages.

How, you may ask, does a managed account aid plan participation? If it looks on the surface like a managed account is all about portfolio creation, you are right.

But here is how a managed account increases retirement plan participation. The federal government has mandated that managed accounts are an acceptable default investment vehicle for employees. By default, the federal government is saying that the employer, without employee consent, may force a worker into any of these accounts. If an employee has not chosen to participate, the employer may choose accordingly for the participant. It’s true the employee can always “opt out,” but historically few ever do.


Why should an employer use managed accounts? The answer is simple. Employees who are covered by a retirement plan need to save for the future. They can do so on their own, which is the better outcome, or the employer can force them to participate and without permission place them in a government-approved managed account. If this has the whiff of big brother, so be it. Often, we need to be told what to do, at any age.